I'm not really into the synths, especially when they reach for higher notes. The melody seems a bit disconnected too. But if you worked on those two pieces, this might be the best dubstep I've heard on NG so far.
It's beautiful. Nothing extraordinary, but exactly what it sounds like you wanted it to be. I'm sorry I don't have much to say, I'd love to help but it's a simple piece. This is just beautiful.
Thank you very much for your kind words.
I really appreciate your compliments. It wasn't really a "piece" at all, so much as an improvisation that I happened to catch on recording. Hence the lack of a defined time signature.
But again, I thank you for telling me that something that came directly from my mind's ear is beautiful. That's perhaps the best comment and compliment that you can give a musician. Unless, of course, what they're going for isn't beauty (Threnody for the Victims of Hiroshima).
It's interesting, you have a good amount of ideas in here, which means you have a good amount of potential. I love the tonal samples (e.g piano) , I love the bass, I don't like the drums. You should look into better drum samples. Specifically your Snare- It's easy to pick one with tons of white noise when you're not listening to it in context, you should try something with a shorter release, less white noise, and peaking more ~ 200hz. Layer it with a long / noisier clap sample with a touch of reverb. I look forward to hearing more.
alright i understand what your saying, i just hate using claps lol i feel like they get over used by a lot of people but if thats what people enjoy hearing ill def concider it on my next production thank you for the feed back, this is honestly my least favrit song ive did on the album so far but there will be more releases stay tuned and thank you for the feedback :)
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